And hopefully less fail. I edited the third to hopefully flow a bit better. I've heard from multiple people now that I should show the characters, so they will be shown in the next comic. Be warned, they may just be wandering around doing nothing. I blame you, the reader, and your opinions. Damn those opinions are their habit of opposition.
Run away little girl, run away.
Fishery rules will be strictly enforced
How can you hope to withstand such overwhelming power?
The fifth (third in the post) isn't loading quite right, it's an older version and has some problems such as typos and mixed up dialogue. Maybe tomorrow.
I hope you enjoy them and thanks in advance for useful criticism. Also special thanks to a certain paladin for pointing out many typos and other bits of fail.
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