tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462978744516866472.post6059225482103983989..comments2024-01-04T06:27:01.723-06:00Comments on Troll Racials are Overpowered: I made a webcomicKlepsacovichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07915576683657376929noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462978744516866472.post-15809668380359142512009-01-10T00:28:00.000-06:002009-01-10T00:28:00.000-06:00I knew the layout of the third was a bit weird. D...I knew the layout of the third was a bit weird. Do you think it would work better with the fish part reversed so the bubbles have more space?<BR/><BR/>As for the text, I'll have to look at it more closely in the future. To fit it on my screen I end up zoomed out a bit. And yea, the font is a little weird. I suppose that's the punishment for being lazy and using the default.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the comments, I liked that they were specific.Klepsacovichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07915576683657376929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5462978744516866472.post-6992032418137824452009-01-09T23:48:00.000-06:002009-01-09T23:48:00.000-06:00The layout on the third one is confusing. It was l...The layout on the third one is confusing. It was leading my eyes downward and to the right, and then all of a sudden the next bubble down made no sense, I tried to keep moving down but by then after "just throw it" everything went out the window. I had to read all of them before I could piece together what order I was supposed to have read them in.<BR/><BR/>Also, what does that second text bubble in that comic say? We are not what? The bottom of the bubble is cut off. Also, maybe it's just my screen but your font doesn't display the letter D very well.<BR/><BR/>Nice for a first try though, I remember when I tried making a webcomic. It's harder than people might think. I could only keep it up for a couple of weeks before I got totally sick of it. Good luck with yours!Kirynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13868901474885427449noreply@blogger.com